t-bone88's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Payday In a Nutshell]

Yes, yes , and yes, so many reasons why I stopped playing. Great job in capturing the BS of PD2.

["Snow-bodies"]

I actually loled, thank you.

[Explosions]

I actually loled at this, thank you!

[soup girl]

I liked it, the animation and background was very original and stylish. It was short, and I was excepting a quip that said something about the soup being on him and the house. lol, all in all, pretty good. I look forward to your next submission.

[Lose Control]

It almost looks like they're scissoring each other. Nice.

I can tell you're improving with each submission. Not too much to critique on this flash except when you first mirrored the dancing model, it was off-centered. And lack of boobage and is a minus. Otherwise, I look forward to your next submission!

Arozura responds:

Thank you,means a lot ^-^

[Droid Animation test]

Good, this test demonstrates that the pedobot is finally ready to leap onto children with promises of candy and puppies in it's basement.

[Aooah]

Odd thing is that I would of sat and watched this for the entirety of the song. Very smooth and entertaining.

[Edwin's Cat - Outing]

Not too shaby, some thoughts:

Some shading wouldn't hurt, doesn't have to be too detailed. It was a nice concept; a small adventure on the way to get some groceries. The ending is very abrupt though and it keeps looping afterwards.

I look forward to your future improved submissions.

[Kawaii Kitten's School Life (FANIME) EP1]

You forgot the tentacle hentai part.

But decent work for your first submission using MSPaint, I'd recommend a different program and a good tablet to draw with if you're going to get hot and heavy (and sweaty and sticky) into this.

Work some on the backgrounds, and possibly shadings. And why does she should like she has a german/hispanic accent? It's cool if that's her thing, just wondering.

I look forward to your improved future submissions.

InusTrash responds:

I actually have paint tool sai and a drawing tablet. uwu I just wanted to do this for fun. Also I did the voice myself as a mockery of other fanimes. But thanks for the criticism anyways c:

[I Ask A Lot Of Questions]

The content was good, I was mildly entertained. Just wish it was more animated instead of frames of still shots. Look forward to your future submissions!