t-bone88's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Chocolate Milk Hiest]

You're getting better. I would say keep on improving on shading, FX, detail, but whats needed a little more to be desired is the voice acting, seemed a little bland at times. I look forward to your next improved submission!

LightningBolt13 responds:

Thanks for the criticism, I'll be sure to incorporate it in the next episode

[ME!ME!ME! Ice Cream]

Some thoughts.

The drawing looks good, you've improved from your last submissions. I imagine when you train more, you'll learn how to move more than just her tongue.

It was a very quick flash, but I imagine it took you some time to get it right.

Sound FX? I noticed they're missing, but bad sound FX could ruin a flash, so it's dicey there.

There's more to be "desired," but overall, you're getting better. I look forward towards your next improved flash.

Arozura responds:

yes,all you said is true ^^ just wanted to make something good in an easy way,and yes I am still learning so a lot of stuff which should be there,is not there :/

[Feli Goat "milk" -NO SOUND-]

OK, so, some thoughts.

Obviously, no sound, so you should working on finding the right sound FX and background music.

Why are the cow's fingers a line of oval shapes?

I can see that you put some effort into detailing the goat and the cloths, but there's a noticeable lack of detail done on the cow

The grammar and english in the dialogue seem to be a little off, such as:

Cow: You are thirsty right?
Goat: is also for my friend

When it should be:

Cow: You're thirsty, right?
Goat: Yep. It's also for my friend since she doesn't like mine.

But this is better than most first submissions. I look forward towards your progress and improved future flashes.

Balareth responds:

thank you very much! its my second animation, am learning by myself to use flash and make animations on my own, the next ones are gonna be better, but thanks for your views! ^^

[Sonic Settles]

I accept this into my life.

[Who're You Foolin'?]

This...was very entertaining. GJ!

[Mr. Sickness]

I don't get it. Did she have like a super-massive epic period or something? She was just laying there, then her eyes intensified and then...?

[My Name Isn't Spongef**k!]

So I take it crab sushi will be a new item on the menu now.

[Mario VS Streetfighter]

Love the unexpected break-dance scene, sh!t was dope, yo!

M4Studios responds:

thx m8 ^^

[Freeky, the incompetent poro.]

Nice concept, but I would recommend utilizing sound effects more, such as their walking, background noise of the environment, the sound of any objects used, etc.

Can't wait to see your next improved animation!

[5 AM at Freddy's: The Prequel]

I accept this into my life.