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[Wickebine Kigyouden]

Ran into a glitch. When I go to my equip screen and while viewing the main weapon, if I use the down arrow , a box comes up that says "undefined" and starts cycling through all of the weapon sprites.

[Avandor]

Some thoughts:

I notice when you attack, you swing the sword twice, does it do twice as much damage as only one swing? Maybe it's best to swing once with each push of the key.

Defense? When I'm jumping onto a small platform with an ogre, they're able to attack me the same amount as I do with them, and they get an extra hit in or two before I land.

I've noticed if I stand further into the ogre, he attacks and does no damage. I was able to stand center mass with an ogre and both of our attacks were not hurting one another.

You might want to think about adding lives. I got fairly far into a level but fell down a hole, then the game restarted from the very beginning; maybe add a continue spot? Also, adding a dash would help with dealing with ogres since there's nothing you can do to defend yourself except to take the damage and hurt them before they hurt you too much. (Where's the replenishment for health in levels?)

I would also like to suggest a reward for killing an ogre. I was able to run past them without getting hurt too much by standing in the middle of them. Maybe if we were rewarded with points that we could spend on upgrades, or some time of item or health came from killing them, it would give more of a sense of achievement or reason to kill them.

Sound FX are pretty minimal here. The sound of the character attacking and music. Maybe add FX for the sword or the mace of the ogres, sounds of the ogres of them attacking or dying, sound of your steps or the sound of landing after jumping.

I look forward to your next improved flash game!

eduardo-secolin responds:

thank you friend! this is my first game , I will try to improve in the next , I'm illustrator and part programming it is something hard for me .

[Comic Run]

It's a nice concept, but here are some thoughts:

Needs music and sound FX. The lasers are very slow and I have to click quite a bit to assure that it does manifest a laser initially. When I came to the boss (not sure why it's some kid on a hoverboard) I got him -22 health.....that's NEGATIVE 22, so you might want to look into that.

[Goosplosion]

I enjoyed it

I liked it a lot, but Y U SO SHORT???!!!

[Nyan Cat FLY!]

Well ok

Song gets too repetitive then gets really annoying, and it got boring in the first 2 min. Maybe next time give power ups everytime you fill up the bar and make a different track plzkthnxbye

[Human Centipede: The Game]

neh

doesnt shoot fast enough and no power ups :(

[Tropical Dragon Slaughter]

so-so

kills some time till ya get bored of the same thing, but btw whats the name of the song on "the deep" level?