t-bone88's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Hot Salsa: Agua de Lechuga]

Very engaging art direction, reminds me a lot of the older animations which I still enjoy to this day. Also, very good use of using sounds and pictures to convey the message, sometimes, the shine of an animation gets lost when voice overs are used but this was great. It'd be interesting to see where this character goes to make things harder for others unless they supported the brand she was advertising or something similar, I could see this turning into a series. This is a good first impression and I look forward to further submissions!

MrHotSalsa responds:

Muchas gracias! I'm working on a pilot for the actual series with the help of a couple cool artist dudes. I hope to keep improving!

[Sitting Colin Kaepernick]

I actually loled at this. Thank you for that.

Brooksay responds:

Always going for the actual LOLs. Thanks for watching

[A Dollar]

And while she's there under the table....I was already "out"

Your animation is getting better, this was very well done. I'm sure the next serious submission you have will include a background. Otherwise, it was a nice original idea.

I look forward to the table having tentacles next time. Cheers!

Arozura responds:

thanks ^^

[DON'T TOUCH ME]

I actually laughed out loud, thank you for that, sir.

Darth-Llama responds:

You're welcome.

[Lose Control]

It almost looks like they're scissoring each other. Nice.

I can tell you're improving with each submission. Not too much to critique on this flash except when you first mirrored the dancing model, it was off-centered. And lack of boobage and is a minus. Otherwise, I look forward to your next submission!

Arozura responds:

Thank you,means a lot ^-^

[Kawaii Kitten's School Life (FANIME) EP1]

You forgot the tentacle hentai part.

But decent work for your first submission using MSPaint, I'd recommend a different program and a good tablet to draw with if you're going to get hot and heavy (and sweaty and sticky) into this.

Work some on the backgrounds, and possibly shadings. And why does she should like she has a german/hispanic accent? It's cool if that's her thing, just wondering.

I look forward to your improved future submissions.

InusTrash responds:

I actually have paint tool sai and a drawing tablet. uwu I just wanted to do this for fun. Also I did the voice myself as a mockery of other fanimes. But thanks for the criticism anyways c:

[Diane & Dog]

Great concept, loved it. Only real issue that's bothering is the quality of the voices, they seem to fluctuate quite a bit.

FlamingMoose responds:

Yeah that's a lack of discipline on my end since I know more about animation than audio, still the message is pretty concise over the people I've shown it to so that means I'm going to have to do something about it. Thanks so much for the kind score and your review.

[The Chocolate Milk Hiest]

You're getting better. I would say keep on improving on shading, FX, detail, but whats needed a little more to be desired is the voice acting, seemed a little bland at times. I look forward to your next improved submission!

LightningBolt13 responds:

Thanks for the criticism, I'll be sure to incorporate it in the next episode

[ME!ME!ME! Ice Cream]

Some thoughts.

The drawing looks good, you've improved from your last submissions. I imagine when you train more, you'll learn how to move more than just her tongue.

It was a very quick flash, but I imagine it took you some time to get it right.

Sound FX? I noticed they're missing, but bad sound FX could ruin a flash, so it's dicey there.

There's more to be "desired," but overall, you're getting better. I look forward towards your next improved flash.

Arozura responds:

yes,all you said is true ^^ just wanted to make something good in an easy way,and yes I am still learning so a lot of stuff which should be there,is not there :/

[Feli Goat "milk" -NO SOUND-]

OK, so, some thoughts.

Obviously, no sound, so you should working on finding the right sound FX and background music.

Why are the cow's fingers a line of oval shapes?

I can see that you put some effort into detailing the goat and the cloths, but there's a noticeable lack of detail done on the cow

The grammar and english in the dialogue seem to be a little off, such as:

Cow: You are thirsty right?
Goat: is also for my friend

When it should be:

Cow: You're thirsty, right?
Goat: Yep. It's also for my friend since she doesn't like mine.

But this is better than most first submissions. I look forward towards your progress and improved future flashes.

Balareth responds:

thank you very much! its my second animation, am learning by myself to use flash and make animations on my own, the next ones are gonna be better, but thanks for your views! ^^