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Aww yeah, Splatoon tentacle Rape scene in the works I hope.

You're getting better. I would say keep on improving on shading, FX, detail, but whats needed a little more to be desired is the voice acting, seemed a little bland at times. I look forward to your next improved submission!

LightningBolt13 responds:

Thanks for the criticism, I'll be sure to incorporate it in the next episode

OK, so, some thoughts.

Obviously, no sound, so you should working on finding the right sound FX and background music.

Why are the cow's fingers a line of oval shapes?

I can see that you put some effort into detailing the goat and the cloths, but there's a noticeable lack of detail done on the cow

The grammar and english in the dialogue seem to be a little off, such as:

Cow: You are thirsty right?
Goat: is also for my friend

When it should be:

Cow: You're thirsty, right?
Goat: Yep. It's also for my friend since she doesn't like mine.

But this is better than most first submissions. I look forward towards your progress and improved future flashes.

Balareth responds:

thank you very much! its my second animation, am learning by myself to use flash and make animations on my own, the next ones are gonna be better, but thanks for your views! ^^

Interesting concept. But why did the colors disappear after the first minute? It's a start, thought. I'd say the next thing you need to work on is details, background, and sound FX. Good luck on your future submissions.

Ewandfufan responds:

Thanks a lot buddy.
There are manny thing to work on but, really appreciate your comment!

I accept this into my life.

This...was very entertaining. GJ!

I don't get it. Did she have like a super-massive epic period or something? She was just laying there, then her eyes intensified and then...?

Love the unexpected break-dance scene, sh!t was dope, yo!

M4Studios responds:

thx m8 ^^

Nice concept, but I would recommend utilizing sound effects more, such as their walking, background noise of the environment, the sound of any objects used, etc.

Can't wait to see your next improved animation!

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