pretty cool
but why did her parents kills themselves in the end?
pretty cool
but why did her parents kills themselves in the end?
good, but...
Ya need it to be longer, if ya did and did a good job at it, I couldn't see why this wouldn't make front page.
The music went well with this flash and I liked the concept, but like I stated, it needs to be longer ya know
Other then that, great job dude
Wow you really think this can get front page?
I would love if that could be done...Yea I'm definitly giving it my all on extending this.
Thank you for the great review!
geez man
I COULDN'T STOP LAUGHING XDDD especially the last 4 min! awesome job dude
xDDD
Ingenuis why to make it a loop, I had no idea till he kept answering phone, pulling out ditto, etc,
awesome, original, and hilarious, thank goodness you had really good audio for this, thats a huge plus
all in all, awesome job b--(^_^)z
nice lol
I liked all the randomness n such, but the only reason why you were shy of a ten was mostly due to audio quality xP
Audio
It was all distorted n such xP
and the flash wasn't all that smooth throughout the flash
but pretty good other then that, i like the idea
Mk...
Nice idea, but the animation was kinda not so great, not so fluid you might say,
maybe next time add more animation to it, something in the background, or something to make it jump out instead of it being so settle as it was
I know where you're coming from with the short attention spam, believe me though,
constructive critisism
make it more fast pace, and the fx with pika runnin, it sounds like he's slowly runnin or walking, and make sure the music lasts throughout the fight,
oh and when onix used hyper beam, the fx only lasted for a few secs, but he was powering up long after, so make sure your fx stick with the action too
other then that, funny ending, great job b--(^_^)z
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